College admissions essays are essential in the process of a student getting accepted into the college they are aiming for. It is basically a textual genre that one uses to persuade the college admissions officer into accepting them into the university. Written towards the end of a student’s four years of high school during senior year, it is important that traits that define them are explained and written down in the essay. This is a type of genre written for a specific audience, and so most college admissions essays are generally written in similar styles.
Rhetoric is using language to persuade, and analyzing the rhetorical features of a textual genre consists of audience, purpose, context, style, and tone. The power of persuasion is important so that the audience, the admissions officers of the college applied for, will deem the student worthy of attending. The admissions officers receive the letter, and they are responsible for solving the problem of finding who is best fit for the college. Aside from those editing the essay for improvement, the admissions officers are generally the only “audience,” or recipients of the papers because only they decide who gets in. That is their job. It would be a waste of time and not really helpful if someone else were to read it, because the sole purpose of this kind of essay is for entering college. Students must make their letters seem professional, while they try to convince that they are likeable and are able to stand out from others in order to impress the readers. So the purpose of this textual genre is to be able to impress the admissions officers.
The context of of a college admissions essay is as follows: many students want to go to college after high school, so it is their responsibility to create a formidable college admissions essay during senior year that would allow them to get accepted. A prompt is given and the student must give an honest response that reveals enough information that allows for the audience to make the decision of either an acceptance or a denial. The prompts are designed so that the candidate can reveal who they are and what positive qualities they can bring to the university. There are several constraints to this essay. There is usually a maximum amount of words that are allowed for each essay to make it easier on the admissions officer and so that the applicant puts down the most important information on the page. Also, there is a deadline for the paper to be turned in. The writer has to set an appropriate tone so that they will seem credible to the reader. Credibility is gained by answering the prompt with clarity. One must sound smart so that the admissions officer would believe the student is prepared to to spend the next four years at the university. Adding in too much humor or negativity would not be appropriate for the setting. Writing words down professionally and in a formal style in the college admissions essay is most common in answering the prompts.
Most importantly, what makes a college admissions essay a college admissions essay? When writing mine during senior year of high school, several conventions that came to mind were my accomplishments, elaborating on my academic achievements, important extracurriculars, and writing about my other traits that made me sound like a good student when answering the prompts. These may not be present in every single college admissions essay, but these are things that come to mind when it is talked about. A college admissions essay, in my opinion, is a very important piece of writing that will help determine the future success of a student.
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ReplyDeleteYou established the purpose of and context for a college admissions essay—nice job. Context can shift too, depending on what school the student is applying to. Is it possible that the same essay to school #1 and school #2 could be perceived differently? Although the focus is on you, the student, they can be individually tailored to schools depending upon their identity or mission. Also, I agree with you that negativity probably isn’t a successful tone to take with this genre, you never know—a tasteful amount of humor could show them that you’ve got some social intelligence, which could take you a long way. ☺
Nice work. In the future, you can make this even better by bringing in some textual evidence/support to help strengthen your claims.
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What I enjoy reading the most about this piece is that the writer did an excellent job breaking down the format and explaining how a college essay is “typically” written. As we all have been through the college application process, we know that while writing our essays, our main goal was to convince the admissions why they should take us. In this article, the author broke down the basic components of writing a college admissions essay and elaborated further on that by going more in-depth with its specifics such as noticing the word limit and deadlines that most colleges put on the personal statements, which I did not think of until reading this piece. Other successful part includes breaking down the content with excellent analysis of the functions of each part, and connecting them to a personal level, which the author stated in conclusion looking back to the time when he wrote the essay. Overall, just as the author mentioned, “credibility is gained by answering the prompt with clarity,” and this analysis did exactly that job.
ReplyDeleteI liked how this piece is applicable to all of us in the class because we all went through this rigorous process. For my college admissions process, I had a counselor who guided me through the steps of where to take my writing. She explained to me that this is the part of your application that gets to share your personality with the world. I like that you mentioned that in your analysis as well. I also thought that you were spot on with your conventions. Capitalizing on your achievements and using them to share your personality and story are very important in this type of essay. Overall a good piece!
ReplyDeleteI liked how this piece is applicable to all of us in the class because we all went through this rigorous process. For my college admissions process, I had a counselor who guided me through the steps of where to take my writing. She explained to me that this is the part of your application that gets to share your personality with the world. I like that you mentioned that in your analysis as well. I also thought that you were spot on with your conventions. Capitalizing on your achievements and using them to share your personality and story are very important in this type of essay. Overall a good piece!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed how relatable this post was. We all went through the college admission projects and while I'm sure our essays were vastly different in a lot of ways that they would still share some similar conventions. I think an interesting area to explore would have been how being "unique" is such a prized idea when it comes to college essays but being too unique seems to screw you over in the process. There seems to be some sort of rhetorical format that needs to be followed in order to get the results desired out of submitting a college essay.
ReplyDeleteOverall a great read!
-Dan