Motivation
and Connection: Teaching Reading
(and Writing) in the
Composition Classroom
The
Benefit of Explicitly Teaching Reading-Writing Connections:
- · I chose to write about this specific section of the journal article because I believe that this is the most important part. This answers the “why” part of the article – why should one teach the connections between reading and writing? Knowing what reading-writing connections actually is and how to implement this concept is integral in understanding the argument, but knowing why it should be done is the foundation of the article’s purpose. Why should one teach about reading-writing connections? Because there is a benefit of “explicitly teaching reading-writing connections.
Teaching Model Texts Effectively: An Example
- · I plan on incorporating the “how” portion of the article by also writing about this section. Once the reader of the genres I am going to write know why connecting reading and writing is taught – there is a benefit – I am going to explain to them how teachers should effectively convey this plan to their students. Thus, the audience will know what is happening, why it is going on, and how it should take place.
Younger audience: A comic book
- · This comic book I am going to create will be geared towards an audience of students, particular within an academic setting. The author, me, will pretend to be a teacher creating this comic book towards a group of students. Although the journal article by Bunn “[Teaches] reading in terms of its connections to writing [to] motivate students to read” (512), I will be trying to motivate the reader – students – to have a reason to do their reading. I’ll introduce why it is important – because there is a benefit of explicitly learning about reading writing connections. I will also write about how the teacher (me) will effectively teach the connections between reading and writing in a way that will get the students excited to learn.
- · To grab the readers’ attentions, I will try to make this genre funny. I will use characters of the same age group (high school) or from media they are accustomed to so that the characters will be relatable to the students. In terms of content, I am not entirely sure how, but I will try to make what the audience will be learning from the comic book seem “cool” so that they will be inclined to keep reading the possibly learn more.
Older Audience: A
cover letter applying to become a UCSB Writing 2 teacher.
- · The content of this piece will contrast greatly to the comic book. Along with the general content usually associated with a cover letter – introducing myself and my purpose for applying – I will talk in depth about my “skill” of being able to teach the connections of reading and writing to the students. Of course, I will first give a reason and explain the benefits of the importance of knowing about the reading-writing connections.
- · This genre will be going into depth about my knowledge, as opposed to the comic book, which gives enough information, but not too much, or the reader would become disinterested. The purpose of this genre is to leave a good impression on the possible future employer, and so this will be written in a serious matter with impressive diction and written skills.
hi, johnny
ReplyDeleteI like your idea about making an educational comic for the younger audience, it sounds very promising to me but I am still a little bit curious about some details. First, about target audience, you said student, but which exact level of students, middle school kids, high school teens or college freshman? The story and tone of the comics for a college freshman can be more serious and academic compare to those for a 13-year-old kid. Second, I am not sure about how to make this comic entaintrerning but still educational, since you said the purpose of it is to motivate students to finish their reading assignment. I have read some comics like this but most of them have a pretty hackneyed story. At least for me, it is hard make something novel. Third, what pictures will you use? Personally, I think it is the most essential and hardest part of make a comic, at least for me since I just cannot draw. Will you find the images online or are you planning to draw some yourself? It will be a bold action to choose the second option.
Hey Johnny,
ReplyDeleteSo I really like your ideas but I have a few questions concerning them. When you talk about transforming your original article into a children's comic book. Do you believe that this transformation is too similar to the original. I feel that you won't be able to incorporate your new ideas into the new genre so that is something to think about. Regarding your idea for older audiences, I really liked the idea because I think it is outside of the box and I believe you are able to incorporate more ideas into this one. It is a good idea that you said you are going to go into much deeper thought and knowledge with this transformation. In order to do so, you really need to go into depth with the original ideas along with your new and fresh ideas. Overall, I believe you can pull this off and be able to really incorporate solid ideas. good luck!
First off, I really thought you set up the piece well. You were well organized and made the piece very understandable to the reader by providing titles of the sections. I liked how you explained in detail what section of the article you will be focusing on. Making the connection about why students should be interested in their reading was a great point and I think that the project will be super interesting. I especially liked the project that you are gearing to a younger audience. Choosing characters their own age may be more appealing than media figures, in my opinion. That way, you will be super specific and unique to your own project! I also really liked your choice with the cover letter because that is something that I would never have come up with on my own. What specific department might you try to base the cover letter off of? Your project sounds super interesting and I really wish I had this article after hearing your plan!
ReplyDeleteDear Johnny,
ReplyDeleteyour analysis of the article is very spot on. In particular, I really like how you broke down all the basic concepts and reasons for why it’s important. In addition, an example to clarify your read was an icing on the cake. On to your younger audience piece, I think a perfect way to create your comic is first, identify a moral to the story. By building around the moral, you can also shape how your character will be, with distinctive personalities that can demonstrate perhaps a good candidate for your story and a bad in. If you want to be extra bold, you can also design a character that went from good to bad or vice versa. There are plenty of ways to design a comic book and I think your theme of motivation can fit this perfectly. For your older audience, I think it is very relevant to many adults and your pitch is a perfect way to assert your “move” onto an audience. However, what specific diction are you going to be using? As education is becoming more advanced, I remember even in high school we are required to write in formal language for many classes so I would like to know what specific diction are you talking about?
Johnny Pham,
ReplyDeleteYou seem to have a very clear understanding of why this piece is so important, especially in a FYC course like ours. Good stuff.
OK, so I think that a funny comic book could do the trick for your goal of “ trying to motivate the reader – students – to have a reason to do their reading.” That captures the essence of this piece pretty well. What you might need to find out, though—and this might take some light background research—is what SPECIFIC kinds of reading, writing, and reading-writing connections are younger students learning about? I’d like you to tie this into a specific grade level and subject/content area. Pretend that the teacher of X class is trying to use this comic book as an educational tool for kids to see that—yeah, reading for information is just 1 way to go about reading. Another way is…” Some other areas for you to consider are: who are the characters of the book, and why are you making those characters… THOSE characters? Every move you make should be grounded in a solid, rhetorically-sensitive idea that captures the Bunn piece in some way.
And for your older piece, I see that you want to write a COVER LETTER TO THE UCSB WRITING PROGRAM TO BECOME A WRITING 2 TEACHER?! AHHHHHHHH, THAT IS PERFECT! To become a Writing 2 teacher, a TA/lecturer candidate would, hopefully, understand the benefits of teaching reading-writing connections and reading in different ways, for different purposes, etc. This will also take some background research so you can make this as life-like as possible. Who is being written by? To? When? What’s the candidate’s experience? Philosophy? What are the format-related conventions of the piece? Etc. Really, really like this idea (I hope you’re not picking it just because you thought I might freak out like I did… it’s a very realistic genre that could capture the essence of Bunn’s piece perfectly).
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Hi Johnny!
ReplyDeleteI like the format of your PB; it made it really easy to read and to follow your ideas. I think it's cool how you're choosing to focus on only a specific section of the article for your transformations because I think that you will be able to go into more depth on that small section and focus on the details ideas of that section of the article. For your transformation for the younger audience I like that you're explicitly saying that you want to capture their attention and motivate them. I also like you're idea of doing a comic because it is a good way for providing the younger audience with something that is both entertaining and educational.
For the older audience, I think your idea is really cool! It will be interesting writing in the shoes of someone who wants to teach a Writing 2 course are you're writing this cover letter for a Writing 2 course.
Really cool ideas and good luck!
Hey Johnny,
ReplyDeleteI really love your idea of transforming this piece into a comic that could be used as a tool for teaching this information to a younger audience. I've found it really boring to learn about a topic constantly when it's constantly in the same format. As a student I have come to expect plain text that is honestly pretty boring most of the time so when my teachers in high school would throw a graphic novel at me, I was stoked. I think that comic books are a really good way to engage students which goes well with the spirit of the piece you are transforming. As a student I like knowing why I'm learning what I'm learning and presenting that kind of information in a more engaging format seems to have a lot of potential.
I think the cover letter for the writing 2 teacher job has potential to be really interesting. I am not super knowledgeable on what that would look like but I imagine that cover letters for applications are likely to be generally pretty boring. I'm interested to see what twists you might put on it to make it stand out and why you decided to do it whatever way you decide to do it.